Week 4 common errors and paragraphing

Common errors

-          Specially/especially

-          That/which

-          Use/usage

-          Were/where

-          Shall/will

-          May/might

-          Less/ fewer

-          If/whether 

Introduction

Patulin is produced by various molds, which primarily infect the moldy part of apples. Removing the moldy and damaged parts of the fruit may not eliminate all the patulin because some of it may

migrate into sound parts of the flesh. Also, patulin can be produced within the fruit, even though it may not be visibly moldy. If moldy apples are used to produce apple juice, the patulin goes into the juice. It is not destroyed by heat treatments such as the pasteurization process. Patulin is a natural human toxin and therefore can have genetic affects within cells, including a developing fetus, the immune system and the nervous system. The recommended advisory level is 50 μg of patulin/kg in apple juice [50 parts

per billion (ppb)].1 Hydroxymethylfurfural (HMF), also 5-(Hydroxymethyl)furfural, is an organic compound derived from dehydration of sugars. HMF has been identified in a wide variety of heat-processed foods including milk, fruit juices, spirits, honey, etc.2

Topic sentence
Patulin is… of apples.	Subtopic 1 Removing the .. the flesh.	Example X1 a Also, patulin.. visibly moldy.
	Subtopic 2 Patulin is … human toxin	Example X2 a Therefore..nervous system.